tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9069539.post110607384181149305..comments2023-10-21T06:19:19.144-04:00Comments on litwindowpane: Good ThingsSuzannehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16623018763486643999noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9069539.post-1106311280423385662005-01-21T07:41:00.000-05:002005-01-21T07:41:00.000-05:00(((blush))) Alberto, you really know how to make a...(((blush))) Alberto, you really know how to make a girl's day! Thank you.<br /><br />Una Aperta y Beso~*Suzannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16623018763486643999noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9069539.post-1106265075332744792005-01-20T18:51:00.000-05:002005-01-20T18:51:00.000-05:00Great to see you back and already working. Whip th...Great to see you back and already working. Whip that ms. into shape! Take no prisoners. I know you can do it.<br /><br />Unha aperta,<br />AlbertoChatyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15981021142138636539noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9069539.post-1106177903729324192005-01-19T18:38:00.000-05:002005-01-19T18:38:00.000-05:00Got it. My friend is excited to do this as well, a...Got it. My friend is excited to do this as well, and I've promised to do the same for her when she's ready. (I've already called her *lol*)I have a feeling this is going to make all the difference. Truly, invaluable advice C. Dale. Gratitudes!Suzannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16623018763486643999noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9069539.post-1106174928840797402005-01-19T17:48:00.000-05:002005-01-19T17:48:00.000-05:00You are welcome. Have your reader/friend read it ...You are welcome. Have your reader/friend read it ahead of time. Spend the first hour just going through why things are where they are or asking questions about order. Listen and discuss. Then, using the discussion, after going through the whole thing, dismantle the ms. and put it back together with this person and your discussion as a guide. I guarantee it will help immensely. It doesn't C. Dalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17270640200393742125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9069539.post-1106168752101454282005-01-19T16:05:00.000-05:002005-01-19T16:05:00.000-05:00C. Dale,
That's a great idea! And the one thing I ...C. Dale,<br />That's a great idea! And the one thing I haven't tried. I know just the person to ask, too. You're the best, thanks.Suzannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16623018763486643999noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9069539.post-1106168310418659722005-01-19T15:58:00.000-05:002005-01-19T15:58:00.000-05:00Welcome back. Best to not just circulate versions ...Welcome back. Best to not just circulate versions but to sit down with someone you trust and go through the entire ms. page by page and discuss why things are where they are. You won't agree, but it will point you in a better direction because you will have to address things in real time. I have seen this save many a ms. where the poet just kept sending it to different people and getting back C. Dalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17270640200393742125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9069539.post-1106165631163052032005-01-19T15:13:00.000-05:002005-01-19T15:13:00.000-05:00A.D. how can I thank you for this? "The Door," is ...A.D. how can I thank you for this? "The Door," is now my favorite Robert Creeley poem, too. I love it, thanks so much. <br /><br />Hi C. Dale,<br />Sorry things are acting up over here.Suzannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16623018763486643999noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9069539.post-1106165219867151822005-01-19T15:06:00.000-05:002005-01-19T15:06:00.000-05:00T & Wendy, thanks for stopping by! :-) Brrr it's c...T & Wendy, thanks for stopping by! :-) Brrr it's cold out there isn't Wendy? I can hear T laughing right now--I think it gets 40 below or something where she lives.Suzannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16623018763486643999noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9069539.post-1106165141599875652005-01-19T15:05:00.000-05:002005-01-19T15:05:00.000-05:00Charles,
The other option I'm thinking about is wa...Charles,<br />The other option I'm thinking about is waiting things out another year and taking stock of the new work that's been coming...of course if I keep that thinking up I'll never finish. *lol*Suzannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16623018763486643999noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9069539.post-1106163843781395912005-01-19T14:44:00.000-05:002005-01-19T14:44:00.000-05:00Sheesh, blogger is messed up this afternoon. Sorr...Sheesh, blogger is messed up this afternoon. Sorry.A. D.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13356106957900416900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9069539.post-1106163740957517012005-01-19T14:42:00.001-05:002005-01-19T14:42:00.001-05:00Welcome back Suzanne. Your figurative banging of ...Welcome back Suzanne. Your figurative banging of the head reminds me of my favorite Robert Creeley poem, <A HREF="http://www.blogger.com/r?http%3A%2F%2Fwww.cs.berkeley.edu%2F%7Erichie%2Fpoetry%2Fhtml%2Faupoem48.html"><EM>The Door</EM></A>.A. D.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13356106957900416900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9069539.post-1106163728567068292005-01-19T14:42:00.000-05:002005-01-19T14:42:00.000-05:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.A. D.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13356106957900416900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9069539.post-1106163715963035782005-01-19T14:41:00.003-05:002005-01-19T14:41:00.003-05:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.A. D.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13356106957900416900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9069539.post-1106163695756781592005-01-19T14:41:00.002-05:002005-01-19T14:41:00.002-05:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.A. D.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13356106957900416900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9069539.post-1106163684908492142005-01-19T14:41:00.001-05:002005-01-19T14:41:00.001-05:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.A. D.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13356106957900416900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9069539.post-1106163671640576952005-01-19T14:41:00.000-05:002005-01-19T14:41:00.000-05:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.A. D.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13356106957900416900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9069539.post-1106158090344517972005-01-19T13:08:00.000-05:002005-01-19T13:08:00.000-05:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.C. Dalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17270640200393742125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9069539.post-1106158011057128922005-01-19T13:06:00.000-05:002005-01-19T13:06:00.000-05:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.C. Dalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17270640200393742125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9069539.post-1106140670737270962005-01-19T08:17:00.000-05:002005-01-19T08:17:00.000-05:00This is all wonderful, Suzanne. I'm glad you had ...This is all wonderful, Suzanne. I'm glad you had such fun. You deserve it!Wendy Wisnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15043973999410467754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9069539.post-1106097155320615622005-01-18T20:12:00.000-05:002005-01-18T20:12:00.000-05:00I have two versions, two different titles. I am gl...I have two versions, two different titles. I am glad you had a good writing weekend and it is nice to have you back.early hours of skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06910786523636730240noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9069539.post-1106091870027391952005-01-18T18:44:00.000-05:002005-01-18T18:44:00.000-05:00Good idea to circulate different versions. I thin...Good idea to circulate different versions. I think I'm going to work on that. I'm not believing in my ms right now, so I think I need to inject some new life into it, and that sounds like a great place to start.Charleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05222297450888695352noreply@blogger.com