The Peat Moss Wrapped and Eye-hooked the Root
A barnacle stole the shape of a petal
and shook the lens free
(a weave of hanger-ons.)
The spigot and snag of the thing
was that a doorknob nicked the wall,
pirouetted into the putty, knocking
the window shade out of its groove
a coil bounced off the sash
and I forgot to oil the balustrade.
The iron and its switch don’t get along.
The radium laminate doesn’t help,
it forms tinfoil jewels,
and crystal hinges
with thumbtack crescents
leaving us: glass & glass.
I will wipe the beads from your forehead.
(for Rebecca xo)
6 comments:
goddamned this is beautiful music, and the underlying darkness gave me shivers. The title, Eye-hooked, really amazing. Spigot and snag, doorknob nicked, knocking, and I forgot to oil the balustrade which feels like a deadly mistake. Please leave this up for a while, I want to read it more. And more. And thank you. I've missed your poems.
Wonderful poem Suzanne. The second stanza is amazing.
I love this poem, Suzanne. I want to read it a bunch more times.
((blush))
Thank you!
Very nice sounds.
I agree, especially about the poem having great sounds.
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