Wednesday, April 11, 2007

NaPoWriMo

I think I've moved on to revision mode--

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No. (10)

20 comments:

Pamela said...

I like this especially the Carnegie--carne (flesh) idea. Keep going. You have inspired me to try it, too.

Radish King said...

Oh yeah.

Ivy said...

You have a sharp edge, girl. ;-)

Ivy said...

14 Waves: crunchy, chewy words, very jewelled. Great closing lines! :-) BTW, is it okay if I refer by title?

Suzanne said...

Oh, sure, Ivy, refer away. Just trying to keep the place neat. ;-)

Sam of the ten thousand things said...

An amazing piece. The middle is so dead on.

Valerie Loveland said...

Great poems today, and especially yesterday.

Nick said...

Nice...! What do you mean no.4? I'm still workin' on number three. :-)

Sam of the ten thousand things said...

No. 4 is my favorite - so far.

Ivy said...

Crocus is so surprising, a continually regenerating surprise, especially towards the end there. :-)

Suzanne said...

Y'all are too kind. Thanks for the read.

Nick said...

Smokin'...

Simmons B. Buntin said...

I am amazed by these wonderful poem-a-day exercises. Ah, such energy!

Suzanne said...

That's all folks! Thanks, again.

Ivy said...

Yay, Suzanne! Well done! :-) Did you have fun?

Suzanne said...

Thanks, Ivy. I did have fun and then suddenly it wasn't fun, suddenly it felt more like a job so I stopped. I might continue in private though -- once this easter egg madness is finished that is. xo

Pam Hart said...

I've participated in a poetry boot camp online. You write a poem a day for 6 days, get some critiquing and give some as well. Intense, but generative writing, and I came away with rough beginnings. Good for you Suzanne in the midst of egg madness!

jenni said...

I keep missing them . . . send them to me!

Nick said...

Gee - I missed it.

Suzanne said...

Ha! You and everyone else Nick. I didn't post it. ;-)